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Roommates (loli) Anonymous 12/10/06(Sat)11:32 No. 17319

It all started when I was 19, in my first semester at college. I'd moved away from home and into my first apartment, and got my first roommate as well. He was a year younger than me, but unlike me he hadn't spent a year after graduating highschool saving up his money for tuition and rent. His parents died in an avalanche at a ski resort, and between their considerable savings and the payout from the life insurance, he could afford college and not have to work for years. I hadn't known it when I met him at orientation and we decided to share an apartment, but he also had custody of his 11 year old sister.

The apartment was big, and nicer than I could have ever afforded on my own, so all three of us had separate bedrooms (hers was supposed to be a laundry room or something originally.). I also discovered my roommate was a bit of a dick who neglected his little sister.

I don't think it was intentional, more a result of losing his parents and having to adjust his plans for the future to revolve around caring for his sibling, and he probably wasn't ready for that sort of responsibility. But unless he needed to give her a ride or buy her something she needed, he basically didn't interact with her. He also barely did anything with me; maybe once a week he'd play video games with me, but he spent nearly all his time in class or shut in his room studying.

His little sister was cute, with her blue eyes, freckles, and short, light brown hair, but obviously way too young for me. She didn't play with dolls or anything, so I guess she was mature for her age, but she also spent all her time shut in her room when she wasn't at school. And I don't think she had any friends at her new school either.

After a month or so with my new roommates, we'd settled into a routine. If they weren't exactly friendly, they weren't bad either; quiet, clean, and they were the only way I could afford a really nice apartment just a block from campus.

I wish I'd known then what I know now. It'd have saved me a lot of grief.


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 15/01/28(Wed)04:33 No. 23164

Newest chapter is 80% complete. Figured I'd give you all an update so you don't feel like I'm jerking your chain.


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Anonymous 15/01/30(Fri)16:26 No. 23171

>>23164
bless your radioactive waste-filled heart, OP.


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Anonymous 15/01/31(Sat)23:48 No. 23181

I cannot wait for the update, bless you op


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Anonymous 15/02/01(Sun)06:02 No. 23183

Just checked and saw that this thread was the very first one and got extremely excited. Been checking every few hours like the fucking junkie I am.


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Anonymous 15/02/01(Sun)06:55 No. 23184

>>23183
I've been doing the same. Every time I see it's close to the top, I get excited and then frustrated.

Soooooon.... *unzips fly in anticipation*


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 15/02/02(Mon)05:24 No. 23192

New chapter is complete, just need to go back and fix typos and a huge fucking continuity error I only just now noticed. Expect it to be up in another day or so.

And I think you'll like where this one goes.


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Anonymous 15/02/02(Mon)15:05 No. 23194

>>23192

kinda considered putting all of this into a nice .epub/.mobi/.azw for myself and all the people with tablets and readers.

then again, I'd be scared shitless of having people finding loli smut on my kindle.

any thoughts on this, OP?


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Anonymous 15/02/02(Mon)19:40 No. 23196

>>23194
Password protect your kindle.
Put in a bunch of other books to camouflage the loli smut.
Never leave airplane mode.
Say it's for research purposes when somebody does find it.


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Hyenide 15/02/02(Mon)20:10 No. 23197

just joined this thread
dear god you're right
YOU'RE ALL RIGHT
i dont know how you can stand to wait

anyone have a compiled version of this?
if not, i'll just go through and c/p it all into a txt file and put it on media fire or something so you dont have to scour the whole thread


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Hyenide 15/02/02(Mon)20:45 No. 23198

>>17361
... i'd like to request a separate story about the sister
also this is amazing <3


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DL for the whole story Hyenide 15/02/02(Mon)23:29 No. 23199

http://www.mediafire.com/view/e871m5qozz75lqc/Roommates_by_OP_wip.rtf

alright so that's every chapter so far in one rtf

p.s

i love you
this is absolutely the best loli story i've ever encountered
you are such a fantastic writer
i beg of you
don't abandon us


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Anonymous 15/02/04(Wed)03:11 No. 23206

>>23192
op pls

pls op


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Anonymous 15/02/04(Wed)21:47 No. 23210

>>23206
^
PLZ


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Anonymous 15/02/05(Thu)01:02 No. 23211

PLS OP PLSSSSS


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Waxing Carnauba 15/02/05(Thu)12:24 No. 23215

>>23037

I assure you, OP is not being harbored in Limbo.

Interesting though that would be...


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Anonymous 15/02/06(Fri)10:22 No. 23240

>>23192
I only just started this yesterday, and I'm so happy. This is better than many books I've read. I'd read anything you write, even non-smut. Maybe even a text book.

I'm also glad I haven't endured the long waits up until now. Ignorance is truly bliss. I almost wish I didn't know this was here, and I'd find it when it was done, but I'm also glad that I've seen what I have. Even if I have to wait now.

You've given me several boners. No homo.


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Anonymous 15/02/06(Fri)23:07 No. 23243

I can see this getting abandoned soon.


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Anonymous 15/02/07(Sat)08:29 No. 23246

Hmm


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Anonymous 15/02/08(Sun)00:10 No. 23250

>>23192
You can always just gloss over and retcon out continuity errors later on.


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Anonymous 15/02/08(Sun)09:18 No. 23253

gee this day sure is dragging out
feels more like a week


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Anonymous 15/02/11(Wed)05:57 No. 23263

This thread is like the board version of the Dad who keeps promising to take his kids to Disneyland, but then empties the jar for booze with a wink and a smile and a 'Maybe next year.'


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Anonymous 15/02/11(Wed)09:20 No. 23264

>>23263
sadly I completely agree anon


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Anonymous 15/02/12(Thu)20:11 No. 23266

RIP this story. OP has failed us once again.


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Mr Anonymous 15/02/13(Fri)02:15 No. 23269

Farewell Fair Fable.


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Anonymous 15/02/15(Sun)01:07 No. 23273

Don't die on me!!! Get the defibrilator while we keep bumping the thread!


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Aeda+Tzebua 15/02/15(Sun)02:08 No. 23274

im dying
please OP
save me
save me with your words
with a story of Sara and her cute freckled face
plz
i need you


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Anonymous 15/02/15(Sun)20:16 No. 23277

OP must either be going nuts trying to fix continuity issues we have all ignored in favor of enjoying the story, or he's just teasing us at this point. That, or he fell off a cliff, a radioactive cliff.


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Mr Anonymous 15/02/15(Sun)20:33 No. 23278

The mutants got him.


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Anonymous 15/02/19(Thu)17:56 No. 23294

He could've atleast posted what he had...


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Anonymous 15/02/25(Wed)02:28 No. 23312

I still believe in you OP!


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Anonymous 15/02/28(Sat)02:42 No. 23328

Bump for posterity. Love you OP !


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Anonymous 15/02/28(Sat)17:06 No. 23331

in OP we trust


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Anonymous 15/03/02(Mon)04:37 No. 23334

>>23164

What happened OP? You said you'd have it out in a day or two... that was a month ago. Can we get an update on what the delay is?


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Anonymous 15/03/02(Mon)10:25 No. 23335

>>23334

Probably being trolled man.


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Anonymous 15/03/04(Wed)07:05 No. 23344

>>23331
E pluribus opus!


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Anonymous 15/03/18(Wed)03:24 No. 23387

>>23199
Thank you for this!


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Anonymous 15/03/18(Wed)16:06 No. 23391

OP will surely deliver... Right OP?

OP?

cardstand.jpg


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Anonymous 15/03/19(Thu)10:15 No. 23394

That's it. I'm fucking done. I used to check this thread daily for updates, then weekly, and by now it's monthly, if that. OP had not only failed but ceased to deliver, I think we can all agree on that. So I'm gonna do something about it: I'm gonna finish this goddamn story. I have a very clear idea of where I think it should go, and have it all storyboard-ed out in my head. I've been writing all my goddamn life, and I'm pretty sure I can write just as well as OP can, if not better. And best of all, I'm not gonna wait 6 fucking months between chapters. I'm seeing this goddamn amazing story through to the end, whether you all like it or not - except OP, at least, if you see this and decide you don't want me to... ahah, who the fuck am I kidding, you don't read this shit anymore, do you?
(No seriously if you don't want me to finish this for you I'm willing to do that much. Otherwise, I'm gonna reread this thing and brush up on the story so far.)


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Aeda+Tzebua 15/03/19(Thu)10:56 No. 23395

>>23394
nope
do not try to finish OPs story
i want to know what really happens
not what you think should happen
im willing to wait
and you faggots can give up on OP if you want
but im staying right here
because i have horrible blind faith in this amazing story


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Anonymous 15/03/19(Thu)12:05 No. 23397

>>23394
Just write your own story.


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Anonymous 15/03/20(Fri)01:46 No. 23399

>>17319
I'm just sayin, the last post that had any story to it, however small, was 7 months ago... jus sayin.


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Anonymous 15/03/25(Wed)16:20 No. 23411

just keep the faith! keep ur boner raging for moar story with cute lolis op will deliver, my boner knows it!


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Anonymous 15/04/07(Tue)09:42 No. 23448

what if OP's crazy ex managed to kill him this time? I'm worried about OP's life, guys


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Anonymous 15/04/07(Tue)21:18 No. 23450

Look guys, this story is 2 years old with some change. If someone else whats to try it, sure, I could use the closure, but otherwise it's done.


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Anonymous 15/04/08(Wed)17:55 No. 23453

>>23394
fucking do it, man. Please, for all of us, fucking do it!!!!!!!!


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Anonymous 15/04/15(Wed)01:13 No. 23477

Second time reading this, enjoyed it very very much.
I'm all for anyone continuing this story.


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Anonymous 15/04/26(Sun)23:06 No. 23502

No way, I've been waiting since last August and OP has not added a single full chapter? FUCK... it's over. It was JUST GETTING GOOD!
He trolled us guys... he got the story to the very edge of total win and BAM, took off on us, laughing all the way to the bank.
Well played sir, very well played in deed.


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Anonymous 15/04/29(Wed)22:40 No. 23511

Just read it all, nice story. If OP isn't dead and sees this then thanks for the story so far, was thoroughly enjoyable and I hope the muse takes you again soon.


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Anonymous 15/04/30(Thu)22:25 No. 23513

This fucking story is dead. Let other things have the front page. I'm tired of seeing this. OP hasn't updated in months. Let it be.


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Anonymous 15/05/10(Sun)01:30 No. 23530

moar


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Anonymous 15/05/11(Mon)22:58 No. 23541

I will bump once more!


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Anonymous 15/05/12(Tue)12:09 No. 23543

>>17319
Ever heard the term "Let sleeping dogs lie?" It. Is. OVER! Unless someone is up to the task of attempting to continue this story, there is no reason why this post should bumped. It is a good story, and we all know it, but it's done.


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 15/05/31(Sun)21:46 No. 23622

Hey guys, just letting you know I'm not dead. I had an accident and I've been in the hospital. Because my life didn't have enough drama.

I'm home again, but I'm still going through physical therapy and am in a lot of pain, but I should make a full recovery.

Meanwhile, I have lots of free time with which to pick up where I left off and continue the story, but to be honest the pain meds are really fucking with me so I don't know how likely that is.

So don't get your hopes up, but don't lose all faith either. We'll see what happens.


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Anonymous 15/05/31(Sun)22:56 No. 23623

>>23622
oh god i cant believe you're back
we've missed you so much man

we would absolutely love it if you continued the story, it's fantastic and it's been forever since you updated last.. but make sure you take care of yourself first. hope you're doing alright, OP. im glad you're alive.


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Anonymous 15/06/05(Fri)03:54 No. 23631

>>23622
op im glad youre back! first crazy gf, then nuclear war, now this, well ive been waiting so many years so take all the time you need to get better


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Anonymous 15/06/07(Sun)06:40 No. 23634

YAY. OP HAS RETURNED TO US


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Anonymous 15/06/11(Thu)02:23 No. 23656

>>23622
Finally!!!


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Anonymous 15/06/21(Sun)06:19 No. 23684

>>23631
Shit, it's going on three years now...

>>23622
Hope you get less fucked soon, OP. I wait patiently for moar.


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Anonymous 15/06/23(Tue)23:42 No. 23688

>>23622
I swear to you op I will spread word of the finished story across ALL the Chans. I beg you, please do continue, give us moar!!!!


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 15/07/21(Tue)01:59 No. 23748

Update: So, while running up to the store to get some snacks, an illegal alien driving a pickup pulled out in front of me while I was doing highway speeds (being that I live right next to the highway). I ended up laying my bike down, but went under the truck; smacked my head real good on his rear bumper (thank God I was wearing my helmet) and he ran over my motorcycle with his rear tires, flipping it over and, in the process, flipping me over with the bike rolling over me and sending me flying into a ditch. My bike is totaled, I had a serious concussion and major injuries to my back and legs, and the uninsured, unlicensed, wetback in the country illegally fled the scene, got arrested for a hit-and-run a few miles down the road, and was released on bail and hasn't been seen since (shoulda seen that one coming, assholes.).

I've been in physical therapy for months, have been home for a few weeks, and am expected to make a full recovery, but other than my therapy sessions I've mostly been confined to bed. Heavy painkillers have been seriously fucking with my ability to function and I'm only now stepping down the doses and starting to resume a normal life. I'll be walking with a cane for a few more months and wearing a brace so my back can heal, but at least now I'm not sleeping 18 hours a day and spending my waking moments either staring at the tv with glazed over eyes or hallucinating scenes from John Dies at the End or From Dusk Til Dawn are happening inside my house. Yeah, that was really fucked up, I had a friend come and remove all the guns and cutlery from my house so I wouldn't accidentally blow a hole in the wall trying to kill a demon. I'm on different meds now and reduced doses, so I'm more or less completely coherent. Still in a lot of pain though, and suffering from a serious lack of motivation to do just about anything, which I suspect is because of the drugs.

Here's where you come in:

The next chapter is already written and as soon as I figure out where the hell it is on my computer (I hide that sort of shit so nobody accidentally comes across it if they borrow my computer, and I'm sufficiently fuzzy-minded that I can't remember where it is at the moment. Don't worry, it'll come to me.) I'll go ahead and post it. Meanwhile, I'd like to start actively writing again, if I can summon enough give-a-fuck to do anything besides giggle at youtube videos.

Finally, if anyone would like to start an official asstr or whatever that site is page for my story and copy-paste it into there (I suppose each post should be an individual chapter or something), you officially have my permission, so long as you credit me, a link to this thread is given in the first chapter, and you name me something other than OP. I dunno, suggest some names and I'll pick a favorite or put it to a vote or something, I can't think of anything. Maybe something related to the amazing bouts of shitty luck I've had (which seem to be a once-a-year occurrence, now that I think about it), or amazing luck that I've survived all this shit, whichever way you look at it.

I have no idea if this post was all that coherent, since I'm currently high as a fucking kite, but there you go. I'll post the next chapter as soon as I find what the hell I did with it, and meanwhile hope to start writing again soon. Soon meaning sometime between now and the inevitable heat death of the universe.


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Annonous 15/07/21(Tue)10:40 No. 23750

suggestions?

Annonololi

Apolla l0li

Servvoruss


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Anonymous 15/07/21(Tue)17:13 No. 23752

Well, anonyMPC has his name because
Anony(mous)MyPrivateCamwhore.

Possibly something similar?


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Meloncholy 15/07/21(Tue)17:23 No. 23753

Wow, OP, that is a serious "accident" you survived. One day you'll be able to tell your kids how you managed to survive an alien encounter though.


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IE 15/07/21(Tue)20:27 No. 23755

>>23753
this

>>23748

LifeLessons
Writer's Bane
The Fukt and the Furious
The Immortal OP
Raging Stoner
Cryptic Apocalyptic
Special Hello

and my personal favorite, Frank Lee


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Bkil 15/07/24(Fri)07:00 No. 23767

>>23755

LifeLessons - Fits the story more

Cryptic Apocalyptic - Fits the apocalyptic wasteland author notes more. This one sounds great though, like a movie title.


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Anonymous 15/08/09(Sun)06:18 No. 23794

Glad you're back, OP. Now, as to names...

I suggest DieForLolis to commemorate OP's trauma.


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Anonymous 15/08/11(Tue)19:50 No. 23795

I look foward for a kiss. Sure, he got blowjob, handjob but now they're bf and gf, there is this feeling this is becoming lovely.


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Anonymous 15/08/16(Sun)09:46 No. 23801

So is this shit still going on, or what?

Also, great stuff, OP. Nobody IRL will ever give you credit, but this is genuinely well written. I wouldn't even call it pornography. You're an unsung hero.


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Anonymous 15/08/20(Thu)09:58 No. 23807

>>23748
godspeed, sir. you got this.


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Anonymous 15/08/24(Mon)04:38 No. 23813

Loved the Brothers in Arms reference from the October bit. (All references are good actually)

What I do enjoy about this story so far is that its more real than most stories based around this (I think so anyways).
For example, the whole part when he came and she thought it gross or the parts with her getting scared when he started rubbing her and such. It seems like a real thing, using her cluelessness/naiveness and such. But, the story being realistic, I am kinda expect a realistic outcome/ending.

I know when he was thinking "Oh shit, I gotta make sure she doesn't tell anyone- etc, etc" I was thinking how you were lay it out in the story and that it may be a bit difficult BUT THEN you make her coming out of the washroom saying that she wants to keep it a secrete.
So I thought that that was a good save.

You didn't put in a whole >>21108 type of deal (What the fuck was up the whole madlibs-loli story?)which is great.

There errors here and there, but that doesn't really matter (typos and such).

I'm getting a feeling that this will end badly (kind of like I said previously).
And I'm enjoying this story and hope to see more!


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moar 15/09/18(Fri)18:34 No. 23842

OP Plz


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Anonymous 15/09/24(Thu)05:54 No. 23851

WE WANT MORE!


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Anonymous 15/09/25(Fri)19:14 No. 23859

OP could be Mint alt?


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Mint 15/09/26(Sat)09:53 No. 23862

>>23859

FUCKING NO. Look at our IDs.


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Anonymous 15/09/26(Sat)15:53 No. 23866

>>23862

T'was a joke. OP is obviously not a mint alt as he doesn't have anger issues towards people on internet forums


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RinFuuma 15/10/04(Sun)04:05 No. 23886

Seriously can't wait to see more of this. I am loving this story so much please finish it OP! :) Hope to see more of it soon!


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Anonymous 15/10/04(Sun)09:09 No. 23888

I'm honestly not expecting any updates. Does anyone know anything similar to this story?


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Suggestion Anonymous 15/10/12(Mon)00:31 No. 23902

>>23752

AnonyMate?


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Anonymous 15/10/12(Mon)02:56 No. 23903

Ran Over on the Road of Apoctalyptic Life.


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 15/10/30(Fri)06:18 No. 23934

I have selected Damocles for my ASSTR name. If some kind soul feels like uploading the story thus far, that'd be great.

If you get the Damocles reference without googling it, give yourself a pat on the back.

Oh, another thing: OP delivers. Faster than Duke Nukem Forever, even!
-----------------------

I didn't see Sara again until the next morning, when she emerged for breakfast in her usual night shirt and panties. I tried to break the ice by asking how she slept, what she thought they would do in school today, and other attempts at small talk, but all I got out of her was a near-constant blush and a few awkward mutters. Bill seemed not to notice, absorbed in a biology textbook. I gave up trying to get her out of her shell, remembered I had a test I hadn't studied for, and cracked open a book while I ate my cereal.

Bill left without saying anything, Sara got dressed and also left without saying anything, and I headed off to class knowing I'd screwed things up somehow, but not quite what it was that I did.

I made it through my classes, even the exam, and got back to the apartment shortly after Sara, judging by the backpack tossed haphazardly on the floor. Bill wasn't home yet, so I knocked on her door.

"Hey kiddo, you wanna play Smash Bros?"

I got a muffled response that sounded like 'no' and retreated to my room. Was she embarrassed or something, or was it something I said? I mean, I did kind of just blurt out that she was wet; maybe she misunderstood? Or didn't know what was going on? She was just a kid, after all. If I was surprised that she could get wet (hell, I'd never even had a girlfriend before, I didn't know it was possible for prepubescent girls), what about her?

She finally started interacting with me again over the weekend, coming out of her room to join me and Bill in a few rounds of Mario Kart and watching a movie with us. By Monday, she was her usual self, wandering out in her shirt and panties (yellow with sunflowers making various faces; I swear the one that looked like it was screaming in horror was placed directly over her butthole on purpose) like a zombie, but slowly waking up throughout breakfast until she was kicking my shins with her bare feet and chattering about how she was going to ace an english test thanks to my tutoring. Bill actually became aware of the outside world just then, telling her he was sure she'd do just fine on the test and that I was a smart guy she should listen to. Then he winked at me, quietly said, "thanks", and got up to put away his dishes before leaving for class.

As she got up to deposit her dishes in the sink, I goosed Sara's butt, eliciting an indignant squawk, then headed out the door to my own classes, waiting for her to leave so I could lock the door behind her.

That afternoon, she was a real chatterbox, talking about how the other girls at her school were so stupid and all they could talk about was tv and boy bands. I wasn't even aware boy bands were still a thing, but you learn something new every day. When I asked her about her test, she seemed to think she had done well and I got a hug while she thanked me for helping her with her homework.

Then she held out her math book and gave me puppy dog eyes until I sat down at the table and helped her out. Call me a sucker for a pretty girl.

Tuesday I barely paid attention in my classes, eager for what I hoped awaited me back at the apartment. I power walked back from campus, did a set of sit ups and push ups to work off some of my energy, took a quick shower, and waited in my boxers for Sara to get home.

My hopes were quickly realized when she came in the door, tossed her backpack on the floor, and immediately removed her skirt and tossed it on the floor in the bathroom. Then, blushing and twisting at the waist awkwardly, she giggled and looked at me as I posed with my hands on my hips.

I slid my boxers down and raised my eyebrows.

"You wanna?"

"Uh-huh!"

She quickly stripped off her shirt and panties and dived onto my bed enthusiastically. I slid in beside her, cuddling up to her, feeling my erection throb as it grew steadily.

"So, little lady: you want to do boyfriend and girlfriend type things?"

She nodded and I scooted her into my lap, where she almost straddled my dick; then I slid my hand down to her slit and resumed where I'd left off Thursday, slowly and gently rubbing her soft, silky labia. She giggled and squirmed once or twice ("it tickles!", and "it feels weird! No, keep doing it.") and we discussed her day at school as I gently fondled her privates. I gradually moved closer and closer to her slit, keeping the bit of her hood peeking out between both of my fingers as I rubbed and she slowly melted against me. Her breathing got faster and she closed her eyes as she leaned against me, a quiet moan just barely escaping her lips.

"Do you like this?"

She nodded and I paused for a moment to examine her crotch; it was bright pink again, not its usual pale white. She was definitely aroused now.

I continued my stroking, gradually increasing the pressure and speed, rubbing up and down her warm slit. She squirmed a little in my lap, letting out a deep sigh, and her little hand found my free hand and squeezed it. I squeezed it back and continued stroking until I suddenly discovered that my fingers were warm and wet. I continued stroking, but eventually she felt the wetness too as my fingers spread it up and down her slit.

Her eyes shot open and she would have flown off of my lap if I hadn't had both arms around her and one hand between her legs.

"What's wrong?"

"Uh!"

She thrashed around and tried to escape, but I held her down.

"Hey hey hey! Stop that! What's wrong? Tell me."

She buried her face in her hands and went limp in my arms, almost sobbing.

"Shhh. Hey, what's wrong kiddo?"

"I can't believe I did it again..."

"Did what again? Oh, you mean this?"

I held up my fingers, which were glistening with her pussy juices. She moaned in abject humiliation.

"Hey, sweetie, what are you embarrassed about? That's normal. Girls are supposed to do that."

"... what?"

"Yeah. You know how my penis gets big and hard when it feels good? Girls get wet down there when they feel good. That's normal."

"Really?"

I raised my hand and adopted a serious face.

"Scout's honor."

I really was a scout, for about a two years period when I was a little younger than her.

She sniffled, then looked down between her legs and hesitantly touched herself with a fingertip, then rubbed the slick fluid between her finger and thumb.

"That's supposed to happen?"

"Yeah."

She snorted and buried her face again, laughing in embarrassment.

"I thought I peed myself or something. I am such a dork."

"You're not a dork."

She turned her to look at me, slight apprehension crossing her face as she asked, "that's really normal?"

"Yep."

"Why does it do that?"

"It's... I'll tell you later."

"Tell me now."

I shrugged mentally and replied, "girls get wet so boys can put their penis inside them easier."

"Oh. So... it's for sex then?"

"Right. It feels better when the girl is wet too."

"Huh. Ok."

She leaned back against me and I resumed rubbing her crotch, taking it easy at first and then getting into the heavy petting again when she seemed to be into it again.

Soon she was back where she'd been before, breathing heavily and closing her eyes.

"Do you like this?"

"That feels good."

I took that as my cue to intensify my rubbing a little more, moving up to three fingers, one rubbing up and down directly over her slit and hood, the other two rubbing her labia.

"Mm. Mmmm. Mmmmm!"

She angled her hips upward, giving me slightly better access and I increased the speed of my strokes. She grabbed my free hand with both of hers, her breaths getting faster and faster and turning into high-pitched moans.

"It's ok. Just let it happen, sweetie."

I watched in fascination as curled her toes into fists, then suddenly stopped breathing as her entire body tensed up and her eyes shot open. After a few seconds like this, she suddenly went limp and began panting for breath and I stopped rubbing; her crotch felt burning hot and was a dark, angry red.

"You ok?"

"Um... yeah. That... wow."

Did she actually orgasm? Holy shit, did I really just make an eleven year old orgasm?

"So... did it feel good?" I asked lamely.

She nodded, apparently exhausted, then rolled over so she was on both of our bellies, still breathing hard. Face to face, I noticed her hair was sticking to her sweaty forehead and brushed it aside.

"That... that was... I saw stars."

I hugged her to me, ignoring my raging boner in favor of seeing to her needs first. I may be going to hell, but I'm a courteous child molester.

"Is... is that what it's like... for grownups?"

I nodded, bent awkwardly to kiss her on her forehead, and then laid down again, her smooth, warm body pressed against mine. I could feel her warm, moist crotch just above mine.

"I wanna... stay like this forever."

So did I.

So did I.


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Anonymous 15/10/30(Fri)09:33 No. 23935

>>23934
Holy shit, good to have you back my good man. How have things been? You feeling/doing alright?


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Anonymous 15/10/31(Sat)00:23 No. 23936

Nice chapter, good to see you back!


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 15/10/31(Sat)03:24 No. 23938

>>23935

Still hurting and still medicated, but I'm able to function. Should make a full recovery, as long as I manage to avoid fucking myself up any further.


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Anonymous 15/11/01(Sun)10:18 No. 23939

>>23938
Sorry to hear that you're still in pain, man. Please do try to get as much rest as you can, and don't worry about us; we've waited this long, and you're good enough of a writer for us to wait as long as you need to recover.


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Anonymous 15/11/03(Tue)02:01 No. 23942

>>23938
get well soon brother


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Anonymous 15/11/03(Tue)02:01 No. 23943

>>23938
get well soon brother


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Anonymous 15/11/04(Wed)20:51 No. 23954

>>23938
Hope you get better


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Anonymous 15/11/21(Sat)09:10 No. 24005

bump


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Anonymous 15/11/25(Wed)04:25 No. 24010

>>23934
This post comes three years after the first one.

You're the greatest, OP. Or Damocles, I suppose it is now.


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Anonymous 15/12/05(Sat)08:40 No. 24025

oh my god yes
still waiting for you OP, but we're patient
urghhh this is so perfect


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Anonymous 15/12/05(Sat)08:41 No. 24026

>>24015
lol, you must be new here buddy


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Anonymous 15/12/07(Mon)09:29 No. 24028

OP by the power of all that is evil, we command thee to awaken
And write another paragraph...

This is the weirdest 3 year boner


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Anonymous 15/12/19(Sat)23:22 No. 24046

>>24028
If the erection lasts longer than 4 hours see a doctor?


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Anonymous 15/12/23(Wed)14:08 No. 24050

>>24046
Sissy!


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Anonymous 15/12/26(Sat)08:47 No. 24053

>>23938
Just wanted to say Merry Christmas, OP. Hope all is well for you.


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Anonymous 16/01/07(Thu)19:46 No. 24071

And a happy new year.


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Anonymous 16/01/14(Thu)09:21 No. 24079

>>23934
YES. YESYESYESYES!!!!


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Wan Shi Tong!!H2L2Z0LGV5 16/01/20(Wed)06:05 No. 24084

>>23934
http://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/Damocles/

Let me know if I need to make any edits.


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Anonymous 16/02/04(Thu)07:57 No. 24093

plz return op


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Bkil 16/02/05(Fri)21:01 No. 24094

>>24084
You included post 17843 in the file on the ASSTR site when I'm pretty sure that post wasn't the OP.



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